God Take Me Home....

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Ok this song I just wrote and might have to work on it somemore but please tell me how it is right now:

God please take me home....
I wanna go hoooommmmmeeee....
Please take me home.....

I admit it was wrong....
To do the things I did...
But I did it for myself....
To get where I am...
And for that I just...
Want to ask you please....
God take me home....

I've been through hell once...
And went through it once more...
But God now I'm stuck...
On hells messed up road...
I just want to get out...
So I'm begging please....
God take meeeeee.......
Hooooommmmmeeeeee......

I know I closed out....
The people close to me....
But give me one more chance...
And I'll will not displease....
Just take me from this place...
I don't want to burn in this place...
Not like others did.....
Gooooodddddd.....
Take me home.....

One more chance is all I ask
One more time to do it right
One more life to live again
One more turn of the wheel
One more purpose again
Lord just take me now.....
God take me home.....

[Ryvox]

Moving. It's pretty good.

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danka

[Ryvox]

Danke*

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oh so thats how you spell it...........Danke again